WRITING SERVICES:

What I do is read your script, analyze it, and make sure what is in your head comes out on the page.

I won't write your script; I'm simply doctoring what you already have. It's a slightly more invasive approach than script analysis. I will make suggestions to your script (done in red, and your original draft is kept safe). This proves to be most effective as you can see the new and exciting direction your script is taking.
 

Prices do vary, but I can include page-to-page notes, questions, thoughts, ideas, suggestions for dialogue punches, action sequences, character arcs, or story changes (without actually making them) and answering any questions you might have that will take your play, script, or novel to the next level. This will include your pitch and introductory letters to agents or managers if needed.

This is not a standard reader’s report  (I offer those as well  — but I honestly think they are no longer relevant).  My job is to help you find the holes in your script and offer solutions to make it better. I keep my eyes on the things that sometimes writers lose track of: structure, style, format, beats, buttons, tone, character development, dialogue, action sequences, and your elevator pitch.
 

After the read and all the notes, you might want to meet. When and if we meet, I will charge $75/hour additional, for brainstorming and working out script details.  This process can be as short or as lengthy as you wish.  Some scripts take more time and can be continued over a period of days. In either case, we will always be in email contact, and I certainly do NOT charge for quick questions or clarifications of what we’ve done together.